Poems From a Note
A series of poems from anything-goes comments
I asked for anything-goes comments.
You delivered.
Thank you Imj for the picture suggestions. Here’s three of three:
After a dip,
I sit—
quiet,
absorbing shadow.
Cooling skin,
feeling thin,
mind in quivers,
a whirlpool of thoughts.
My peace,
restricting time—
enlightenment, divine.
Lost in self-reflection.
Some thoughts kind,
some cruel;
I search
for rhyme or reason.
Check out the note that started it all and if you want to throw something at me, drop a comment:
Until the next loop: keep your knots light and your vibes right.
I got range, there’s no denyin’, so go ahead and give my other reads a tryin’:
See What You’re Tangled In:
I loved the way you played with words in this poem, especially this phrase
"My peace,
restricting time—
enlightenment, divine.
Lost in self-reflection."